Reading this was a pleasure which made me go deeper into this and here is the little wonder that the inspiration did to me:
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She was reading a book. I caught her glance and smiled.
She smiled shyly and went back to reading.
I sat next to her on the bench in the park.
She moved closer.
Till our hands touched. It rained.
I walked away. So did she.
Behind bars now. Never steal a Samsung mobile again!
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reminds me of 5-Star :-)
ReplyDeleteWill give you 20 more words. I have a few doubts! Can you clear them?
ReplyDeleteAnganne 55 fiction ennu oru saadanam ondennu manasil aai... Why don't you try something like 10 Fiction now...
ReplyDeletegud one !
ReplyDeletenice one... if you are an lotr fan like me, you might like this... :D
ReplyDeletehttp://www.uknet.com/gallery/55-Fiction/lotr
@Ram : even I felt so, after I wrote it :)
ReplyDelete@skpan : :-S
@vimal : shud try now.. but loks like u r exploring already!!
@silencekilled : tks :)
@adi : tks for the link... no, not into lotr!!
Well...
ReplyDeleteMy advice.. Whenever you get a chance, steal a samsung phone. Two positive's
1. The company will see boosted sales
2. The rain problem in the city will be a story of the past.
@Rat shall suggest!
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