Some more 55-stuffs :)
Goodbye Home
Mother thinks I am growing too big for my house and I should leave home now.
I think its not fair!
I am pushed out of my home. I can't fight back the force.
Flashes of light. Ouch, it hurts!
I cry my lungs out.
Somebody looks at me and shouts "Its a baby boy!"
SMS Birthday
Beep Beep. 1 new SMS. "Honey, I am caught in something important here! I shall reach late from work. Can you please pick your birthday cake on your way back from office? And don't forget to call me when you blow the candles and cut cake. I will wish you over the phone. Love you!"
13 comments:
luved the 1st one :) and i hope nobody gets to celebrate their b'day like in ur 2nd one!
Ee 55 words kadhakal bhayankara sambavangal thanne. (Thatteettu vazhi nadakkaan paadilla, eeyide).
Actually ningal (athaayathu ee 55 words kadhayezhuthukaar) engane aanu ithra krithyamaayi ee 55 words-l kadha ezhuthunnathu?
Oru kadha ezhuthunnu, ennittu 55 words ozhike baakki ellaam delete cheythu kalayukayano? Adhyathe words ano avasaanathe words ano kalayunnathu? Atho random aayittaano?
Atho, ezhuthi thudangiyittu 55 words aakumbo full stop ittu nirthuka enna approach aano?
Soo: Goodbye Home is great...
Geo: Chupraho... njan evide writer's block karannam ezhuthan pattathe vishamichu irikkuva...
Hey Soo,
The 55 word thing is nice :)
Have you heard about the 6 words story ? It started with Ernest Hemmingway's 6 word short story : "For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn."
http://www.ayearfromoakcottage.com/2009/04/for-sale-baby-shoes-never-worn.html
Saumya
@sandeep : thank you :)
@geo : bhayankaram thanne... ippo entha ivde prashnam????
@vimal : thanks, my 55-word-pal :)
@saum : hey, welcome to my space :) yes, I had read abt flash fictions on wiki and got to know of the 6 word story... I was amazed to read that thr are even 2 word stories... :D
Please allow me to try a 2 word story:
The End
@Gasper: Nee aa traffic block-l thanne stuck aayi pandaaramadangatte. ee block orikkalum maaralle...
Kollaam...
Dont even tell your kids about this 55-word stuff.. They have the BTech Economics paper to clear a few years from now!!!
Vow! The first one, crafted with such finesse...
@Geo All rules of short story apply to 2 word story as well ;)
@Rat :) Thats true! Ini thottu no short stories!!!
@Arun Thank you :) and welcome to the page!
55 words! Enjoyed reading them.
And other posts, too.
:-)
Wow... thats amazing... how do you come up with these ideas. The best delivery story I ever read...
I like the SMS birthday...Being maried, can relate to it ;)
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