Friday, June 12, 2009

Park Bench

Reading this was a pleasure which made me go deeper into this and here is the little wonder that the inspiration did to me:


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She was reading a book. I caught her glance and smiled.
She smiled shyly and went back to reading.
I sat next to her on the bench in the park.
She moved closer.
Till our hands touched. It rained.
I walked away. So did she.
Behind bars now. Never steal a Samsung mobile again!
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8 comments:

Ram N said...

reminds me of 5-Star :-)

skpan said...

Will give you 20 more words. I have a few doubts! Can you clear them?

vimalgasper said...

Anganne 55 fiction ennu oru saadanam ondennu manasil aai... Why don't you try something like 10 Fiction now...

Anonymous said...

gud one !

Aditya said...

nice one... if you are an lotr fan like me, you might like this... :D
http://www.uknet.com/gallery/55-Fiction/lotr

Soorya said...

@Ram : even I felt so, after I wrote it :)

@skpan : :-S

@vimal : shud try now.. but loks like u r exploring already!!

@silencekilled : tks :)

@adi : tks for the link... no, not into lotr!!

Rat said...

Well...
My advice.. Whenever you get a chance, steal a samsung phone. Two positive's
1. The company will see boosted sales
2. The rain problem in the city will be a story of the past.

Soorya said...

@Rat shall suggest!